Linggo, Agosto 21, 2011

A Quick Introduction


 Welcome all to my e-portfolio for Ms. Kate Steel’s class. This portfolio features the essays I’ve done that I’m most proud of. Take your time and read. Comments are loved and appreciated.

First is my compare and contrast essay between two of the most difficult subjects I’ve ever taken- ENGALG1 and ENGTRIG. Through this essay, I’ve presented my writing skills not just in terms of comparing and contrasting but also in using what I’ve acquired from the earlier lectures I’ve encountered. Next one is my extended definition essay, Intelligence Defined, which exhibits my academic competence as an effective communicator and a critical and creative thinker through my depth analysis and much deeper definition about the topic. On the other hand, my argumentative essay, Descriptivism vs. Prescriptivism, manifests my being as a service-driven citizen by demonstrating my stand as a descriptivist in an issue concerning the world of linguistics. Lastly, my exit essay lists my overall learnings and achievements by undertaking the ENGLCOM course.

 Among the desired learning results expected from a La Sallian, I believe that I had a hard time achieving to be a reflective lifelong learner due to the fact that I find it difficult to pinpoint my weaknesses in terms of grammar, word choice, and mechanics. I plan to achieve that DLR by approaching my professor to check my works and refrain from making the same mistakes again. The revisions done on my essays were more on word choice and tenses most notably on my argumentative essay such as using the word ‘approach’ rather than ‘type’ and using ‘resolutely’ rather than ‘absolutely’.

I’m proud of every work I’ve done whether it was excellent or quite disappointing. 4.0 or not, what truly matters is that I’ve learned. After all, that is the reason why I’m here.




Table of Contents



Entry
Date Submitted
Score/ Perfect Score
Entrance Essay


Compare and Contrast Essay -ENGALG vs ENGTRIG


Extended Definition Essay -Intelligence Defined


Argumentative Essay – Descriptivism vs Prescriptivism
8/22/2011

Exit Essay
8/22/2011





Entrance Essay



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Compare and Contrast Essay – ENGALG vs ENGTRIG



ENGALG vs ENGTRIG
                In this essay, I intend to compare 2 of the most torturing subjects I’ve had in college so far and even in my whole student life – ENGALG and ENGTRIG. I also intend to apply in this reading material the tricks I’ve learned from my previous ENGLCOM class.
                ENGALG1 is a subject taught by our professor named Kerry Cabral. We get to meet him thrice a week. We have 1-hour classes every Monday and Thursday at room 1204 while we have shell-shocking 3-hour classes on Tuesdays at a bit larger room called the computation lab. All of these classes are scheduled only on mornings. So far our lessons were about factoring, grouping, radicals and the like. We are not allowed to use calculators. Based on my block’s experiences for the last 7 weeks, we have concluded that despite having easy examples and exercises, the quizzes are considerably difficult to solve. This subject serves as a prerequisite to many more advance subjects we would be taking in the future if we are to pass. Hopefully, we would. Speaking of passing, the grade needed to survive this 2-unit subject is 60%.
                ENGTRIG1 may be similar to ENGALG1 due to the fact that they both focus on Mathematics but they do have their own differences. As our own subject, ENGTRIG1 is taught by a different professor – Mr Teddy Monroy. We take his class just twice a week during Mondays and Thursdays too at just a room nearby – 1203. However unlike the former subject, ENGTRIG1 happens every afternoon as our last subject to take before we are off the hook for the day. While Kerry teaches us math stuff related to polynomials and similar lessons, Teddy on the other hand teaches us lessons revolving around trigonometric functions and graphing. At the moment we are not allowed to use calculators too until the third quiz. Just like ENGALG1, this subject has easy exercises paired with difficult and not to mention frustrating quizzes. This 2-unit subject also serves as a key to various mathematical subjects needed to be taken on the road to being an engineer. 55% and up is the grade to beat!
                As a conclusion, these 2 subjects are very different from each other. Aside from the obvious reasons such as being both math-based, these subjects seem to be only similar because I find them both very challenging.


Extended Definition Essay – Intelligence Defined



Intelligence Defined

Generally speaking, intelligence is defined as the capability to learn and adapt to a certain environment. However, numerous definitions and ideas have been proposed throughout time by experts who have studied it. To begin with, intelligence is derived from the word intelligere – a Latin verb that means “to pick out” or to discern. Another form of this term is intellectus which became a technical term for “understanding” during medieval times. Early philosophers such as Francis Bacon, Thomas Hobbes, and many others have rejected this idea and found it absurd and thus, the word “intelligence” has become less popular in English language philosophy since then. Later on however, the term has been studied once again in a more psychometric approach.

                On the 13th of December 1994, 52 researchers issued a public statement called “Mainstream Science on Intelligence”. This statement explained that intelligence is a very general ability that comprise specific abilities such as to reason, to find solutions, to comprehend complex ideas and many more.  In 1995 another large group of people called Task Force (created by the Board of Scientific Affairs of the American Psychological Association) issued a report known as “Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns” . This report stated that each individual differs from one another in terms of adapting to the environment and grasping complex ideas. These differences are substantial and are never entirely consistent. A person’s intellectual performance may also vary depending on the occasion.

                Aside from the accounts above, individual researchers have also made their own definitions of intelligence. According to Wikipedia, Albert Binet, French psychologist and inventor of the very first intelligence test (known as the Binet test), simply defined it in a single word – judgement. In other words, Binet’s definition is that Intelligence would depend on one’s good and practical sense in adapting to certain circumstances. American psychologist David Wechsler, developer of the intelligence scales, laid out his own definition in terms of an individual’s capacity to act with a purpose, to analyze rationally, and to deal effectively on his/her surroundings. In a different light, Lloyd Humphreys defined intelligence as a process of acquiring, having stock knowledge, retrieving, fusing, comparing, and using the newly-found skills. Rather than giving a definition, a famous American psychologist from Harvard, Howard Gardner, instead related intelligence to problem solving. He stated that in order to improve an individual’s intellectual competence, one must take on problems, form an effective product, and create new problems thus, creating a new foundation to acquire more knowledge. Another well-known American psychologist like Howard Gardner who goes by the name of Robert Jeffrey Sternberg defined intelligence as a behaviour rather than an ability. He stated that this human behaviour is based on one’s will to achieve his/her goals.  Next is Linda Gottfredson who simply designated intelligence as our capability to handle complexity in life. Last but not the least is Reuven Feurstein who stated intelligence as "the unique propensity of human beings to change or modify the structure of their cognitive functioning to adapt to the changing demands of a life situation." which can be found on his theory of Structural Cognitive Modifiability.

Regarding theories, a number of theories and models have been proposed to define Intelligence in terms of a much more complex and larger picture. One of these theories and probably my favourite is Howard Gardner’s theory of Multiple Intelligence. In this model, Gardner divides intelligence into a variety of abilities that are weakly correlated to each other rather than just a single general ability.

 The list of intelligence originally contained 7 types. The first one is the Visual/Spatial intelligence which deals with one’s capability to visualize things. People who fall under this type are usually engineers, artists, and architects who are adept at interpreting maps, charts, diagrams, and other kinds of visual material well. The next one is the Verbal/Linguistic intelligence. Individuals who can manipulate words well either in writing or speaking belong this type. Other skills that qualify one on this type are being skilled at debating, at writing stories, and at explaining. Next is the nerdy Logical-Mathematical intelligence which relates to an individual’s competency to reason out, to recognize patterns, and to logically analyze problems especially ones that deal with numbers and relationships. Athletes do also have their own type of intelligence – the Bodily-Kinesthetic intelligence. People who are classified to this type are equipped with good body movements, physical control, and hand-eye coordination paired up with great dexterity. The next type of intelligence is the Musical-Rhythmic intelligence which is made especially for those who greatly appreciate the art of music. This type deals with the skill to analyze musical patterns, rhythms, and sounds. Politicians and psychologists usually belong to the next type – Interpersonal intelligence. This type relates to one’s skill to understand and interact with other people. On the other hand, philosophers, theorists, and scientists fall under the contradicting type - Intrapersonal intelligence. Individuals who can unleash much more of their potential when alone and are good at self-reflection such as the 3 professions I mentioned are classified here. Later on Gardner included an eight type – the Naturalistic intelligence for nature-lovers such as botanists and zoologists. Anyone who is highly aware of the changes of the environment also qualifies to this type. Recently, an additional type was proposed. The Existential intelligence focuses on a person’s aptitude to contemplate such unusual phenomena. However Gardner disliked the idea of having “spiritual intelligence” and thus, this type has yet to be confirmed official. All in all, there are 9 types in Gardner’s model.

                Another well-known model in identifying and expounding intelligence is the Cattell-Horn-Carroll theory or simply known as the CHC theory. This theory is actually a fusion of 2 older theories – Cattell and Horn’s Gf-Gc theory and Carroll’s Three-Stratum theory. The CHC theory was proposed by Carroll after expanding the Gf-Gc theory through factor analysis. This model was further elaborated by McGrew on 1997 and later revised again with the help of Flanagan back on 1998.

                The CHC theory or model contains 10 broad abilities with 70 narrower abilities below. The first broad ability is Fluid intelligence or in other words, the ability to reason out and form concepts. The next one is the Crystallized intelligence which refers to acquiring knowledge and being able to share it with others through any means of communication. Similar to the Logical-Mathematical intelligence, Quantitative reasoning relates to numbers and relationships. Self-explanatorily, the Reading and Writing ability is all about comprehensive reading and writing skills. The next ability is the Short-Term Memory which is the potentiality to hold on to information immediately and use it within such a short matter of time. Another ability is the Visual Processing ability which bears great resemblance to Gardner’s proposed Visual-Spatial Intelligence both dealing with visual presentations. While this ability deals with the use of one’s eye, the Auditory Processing on the other hand focuses on using one’s ears well. Auditory Processing refers to the skill of an individual to analyze, synthesize, and discriminate speech sounds even at the most distorted situations. The next proposed ability is Processing Speed. This one refers to the capacity of an individual to perform such tasks and maintain focus despite under pressure on a certain situation. Lastly, the Decision/Reaction Time/Speed reflects to the aptitude to react to stimuli at a very short span of time. In comparison with other well-known theories, The CHC theory is the most comprehensive and empirically supported psychometric theory of the structure of cognitive and academic abilities.

                The famous Robert Sternberg also proposed a theory and model of intelligence of his own – the Triarchic theory of Intelligence. This theory has been groundbreaking itself among researchers for being one of the first theories to take a cognitive approach rather than the usual psychometric one. Sternberg proposes that human intelligence refers to how well an individual deals with the changes in his/her surroundings throughout his/her own lifespan.

                His theory has been cut into 3 major subtheories. The first one is the Componential/Analytical Subtheory which relates to analytical giftedness. This is the skill to take apart problems, to think outside the box, and finally to make surprising solutions. However human beings that specialize in this type are usually not creative. For instance, one may have excellent grades by having perfect scores in tests but that person may still have trouble graduating for not being adept enough to formulate new ideas. The next stage of Sternberg’s theory – the Experential/Creative Subtheory is divided into 2 parts in terms of experience – Novel and Automation. A novel situation is one wherein an individual doesn’t have an experience with. Thus he/she has to be adept enough to find a new solution which a majority wouldn’t easily notice. An automated situation on the other hand has been performed multiple of times and has been done from time to time again with great ease through redundant solutions.  According to Sternberg, the problem of this stage is that if one individual is adept on one of these 2 parts then it is unlikely that he/she is also skilled on the other. The last subtheory is the Practical/Contextual Subtheory which is broken down into 3 parts: Adaptation, Shaping, and Selection. This subtheory is also called as an individual’s “street smarts”. Adaptation is one’s intelligence or skill to adjust to his/her surroundings the same way a person adjusts to a rainy weather by using an umbrella and wearing a jacket. Shaping on the contrary is when one changes his/her surroundings instead rather than himself/herself to make the needed adjustment. One situation is when a teacher invokes a new rule of raising one’s hand to be able to speak thus, reducing the noise level a lot. Lastly, Selection is when one simply finds and chooses a new and better alternate environment to meet up with his/her own goals and needs. A good example is when a family goes abroad to another country to experience a better life. Unlike the second subtheory, Sternberg states that an individual may be skilled in all 3 parts of the third subtheory.

                To summarize, intelligence has been defined in numerous definitions by many especially by those who have spent quite an amount of time in their lives for that purpose. Furthermore, theories and models about intelligence have been proposed to define and elaborate specific types of intelligence rather than to define intelligence as a whole. In my own book, I define intelligence as the capability of an individual to acquire new knowledge and have the versatility to use that knowledge and other resources he/she has such as his/her own God-given talents in order to adapt to various situations.

Argumentative Essay – Descriptivism vs Prescriptivism




Descriptivism vs Prescriptivism

                          In a world filled with grammar enthusiasts, there has always been two contradicting sides – the liberal descriptivists and the conservative prescriptivists.  Both sides have their own advantages and disadvantages. However in this essay, I intend to fight as a just and free descriptivist in the hope that you readers might also be one too. If given the chance, I would have written this piece of work of in a more casual way to further illustrate my cause. Unfortunately, it is prescribed that I am not allowed to do so for an academic essay.     
  
                Descriptivism is an approach to grammar that focuses on how language is spoken. Descriptivists believe that there’s nothing wrong with language evolving throughout time and that there’s no need to maintain a specific standard. These grammarians also avoid making any linguistic judgments and instead, formulate observations on how different tongues behave and change. As a descriptivist at heart, I strongly believe that change is good because our individual style of speaking defines our own generation without any regard from the previous ones. The way we speak our linguistics defines our own society. We are modern. We are unique and original. We are not second-rate copycats. We are fine, fresh, and fierce!

                       Unfortunately, those in authority today don’t see it from the same perspective. It’s quite doleful to deliver it but by today’s standards, prescriptivism overpowers descriptivism. The principles of  descriptivism are seen as far too casual to be even considered formal. In contexts like education and publishing, people are ‘prescribed’ to speak and write as systematic as possible (which is why I’m writing this essay formally). In order to ace by way of a prescriptivists’ criteria, a particular description may be acceptable if it accomplishes some of the following objectives: 1) It has to sound formal, 2) the structure of its morphemes has to be adequate, 3) The sentence has to be logically structured , 4) the vocabulary has to be sufficiently broad, or 5) it has to be considered ‘genuine’.

                Now you must be wondering who these prescriptivists are and what their motives are. Prescriptivists consist of the usual educators, professors, poets, politicians, writers and other grammarians who deny change. To simply put it, prescriptivists seek to have a standardized language in order to make communication much more efficient. In order to meet that expectation, they set rules and criteria to reject and eradicate any descriptive language they deem ‘improper’. In short, they judge!

                Unlike descriptivists, prescriptivists possess a huge trump card – their authority and power. Basically, any government would prefer to dictate with a set of rules in communication for they too believe that these regulations can lead to a much more solid progress through facilitating easier communication. The same also goes for publishing books and education. By having a standard language (preferably Standard English by English-language prescriptivists), students are able to read and comprehend efficiently. Authorities such as the Academy of Sciences of Albania and the French Academy were established for the cause of setting up language rules and reinforcing them in their own respective languages. However there are some western countries where descriptivism is starting to be the dominant force since it allows the use of various styles of communicating. The government influence of prescriptivism differs in each country.

                Despite all the advantages prescriptivism has over descriptivism, I’m still rooting for the latter. Prescriptivists say that the judgments they conduct are for a ‘noble’ cause but have they ever even looked at themselves in front of the mirror and evaluate their own mistakes?  No person is perfect. They are also peoples therefore they are definitely not perfect. Who are they to dictate what is correct and what is not? If that’s the case then we have as much right as they do to discern our own tongues. Now have they ever imagined that if the so-called Standard English had been maintained all this time then we would probably all be speaking the same way as William Wordsworth and the other poets did back then? You could also say that we would also be writing in Old English like those way back in the Medieval Ages. Now wouldn’t that be dull and boring not to mention unoriginal? Prescriptivists say they want a standard language because they aim for better communication and therefore better progress in today’s society but have they ever realized that if our linguistics were to remain constant and motionless, then there would be no progress at all? I believe that if the world keeps moving forward then so should our language. There’s no such thing as a universal Standard English for every place has its own sense of style with it. Nothing is set in stone.

                I have to admit that there are times I tend to be a prescriptivist especially when I find ‘jejemons’ and ‘konyos’ roaming around the corner. But all-in-all, I can say that I’m resolutely sided with my fellow descriptivists. Prescriptivism may have had the most power frequently if not always but I believe that now we are in the age of technology (specifically the Internet), descriptivism would surely catch up thanks to all the diverse slang words and terms apparently coming from nowhere. Language was meant for us to understand and communicate with each other. As long as we can understand each other well, then I don’t see anything wrong with language evolving over time.










Exit Essay


Reflective Essay: Exit Level

After 14 weeks of taking the ENGLCOM course, I would like to believe that I have made an improvement myself. After all the discussions, quizzes, activities, and essays we’ve been bombarded with, I have come to realize that I’m now a better reader and speaker. I have improved some of the areas that gave me a hard time. However, I would still like to keep improving on and on.

                One such area I would like to sharpen more is my vocabulary. I have learned numerous new words while listening to Mr. Lira’s and Ms. Steel’s discussions and activities. I believe that by applying all sorts of new words, I would be able to write essays much more colourful and diverse and less redundant than the ones I wrote. Another area that I have revamped is my penmanship. It’s still quite grotesque to look at but definitely not as bad as it used to be. Currently, I’m still trying out new styles of writing to cover up my old one. In terms of communicating, I would like to continue boosting my fluency in speaking English. Thanks to the ENGLCOM course, I now have the tendency to speak English more often. I still have a couple of other weaknesses to work up on though such as comma splicing and using the appropriate punctuations at the right time.

                I have also elevated to the next level my reading and writing competencies such as skimming, scanning, and looking for context. I now see language in a much bigger picture. One instance is back then; I used to see adverbs as just adverbs but now I see how puzzling and versatile they are. I have also acquired some new learnings such as modals, adjuncts, disjuncts, conjuncts etc.

                Technically, I really don’t have much any expectations but to learn. If I did have any expectations from the beginning, then I can definitely say that the ENGLCOM course has met those. Actually, both components have been much more rewarding that I’ve thought. I don’t think that the ENGLCOM course has helped me accomplish my goals. Why? Because I’m definitely sure that the ENGLCOM course has aided me reach those!

                Looking back before I went to DLSU, I am a much superior linguist that what I used to be and I owe it to my professors. However like they what people say, there’s always room for improvement! I’m sure my next English courses would be as rewarding as the one I had.